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Have you ever wanted to scream?
Scream until your lungs stopped
Have you ever wanted to cry?
Cry until your eyes burned

Have you ever lied in bed awake?
Just thinking of the ways you could die
Have you ever faked a smile?
Just so no one will ask

Have you ever stared in the mirror?
And just wanted to hit it until the glass broke
Have you ever stayed up late?
Wishing that the pain would go away

Do you ever wonder?
Wonder what went wrong
Do you ever ask?
Ask why it all happened

Has anyone ever asked you?
If you were ok
Have you ever answered I'm fine?
And just walked away knowing you weren't ok
so i feel this way alot actually and alot of other people do to so i put all of my 'pain' on to the paper
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xAiedail Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yes I have.
And I've actually wrote a poem about the last part.. cx [link]

And it's nice to know that I'm not the only one who feels like this sometimes. It makes me feel less alone, through I know I'm never gonna talk irl. with the persons who feels like this..
But it's a really lovely poem.
I really love that I can relate it to myself - it just make the poem better. It's wellwritten, the words hits precisely, and describe exactly how this pain feels.
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XxXSammySuicideXxX Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011   Writer
thank you so much for the kind words im glad you liked it
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xAiedail Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. (;
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ChibiStarr Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, I literally got the shivers when I was done reading this. It's so expressive and powerful.
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XxXSammySuicideXxX Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011   Writer
wow thank you
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ChibiStarr Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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TehEvilPrincess Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
Sorry sam...<3 Hope you start feeling better n less sad ^-^
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XxXSammySuicideXxX Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011   Writer
thanks cora
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TehEvilPrincess Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
Welcome gurlleh ^-^ hehehe
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Pepamint Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
Strong, emotional and well worded.

:hug: So many others, even I can relate to this. It's good to write out what you feel and experience, it let's you know there are others out there who feel the same way, and that you aren't alone.
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