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I try my best to never break
I try my best to stay awake
But as the days roll by
I find it hard to stay alive

I see a darkness
That calls my name
It has a game
It wants to play

The point is death
The player is him
The darkest shadow
There's ever been

If you fear
Then he will win
If you fight
The game never ends

He made the game
He picked the rules
You cant win this game
Don't be a fool
tell me what you think
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vampiricdemoncutie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
and who exactly is him?
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XxXSammySuicideXxX Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011   Writer
grim reaper
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vampiricdemoncutie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah
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fuckerm Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
What a mad delusion
Living in that confusion,
Frustration and doubt.
Can you ever live without the game?
sad sad game.
mad game.
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fuckerm Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
thanks, but it's not mine.
that's a part of a song,
that your poem made me think of.
i like that song, mow i like your
poem.. You'll never guess who rote it,
so i'll give you a title you look it up..

(Look At Your Game Girl)
I would look for the lyrics that's what i like to do,
but you could look up the song as well
It's A Grate Song No Madder Who Sings It..
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fuckerm Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
wow i said mow didn't i?
i ment Now..LOL..
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XxXSammySuicideXxX Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011   Writer
thats awsome
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fuckerm Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011
wow! deep!
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XxXSammySuicideXxX Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011   Writer
thank you
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CheCats Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011
Awesome! I cant rhyme sadly. :'( but luckily im good with free verse. Love it!
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